Poem - My First Time

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Poem - My First Time

Post by Evil_Otaku on Thu Apr 16, 2015 6:12 pm

My First Time

The sky was dark
The moon was high
All alone just her and I.

Her hair was soft
Her eyes were blue
I knew just what she wanted to do.

Her skin so smooth
Her legs so fine
I ran my fingers down her spine.

I didn't know how
But I tried my best
I started by placing my hands on her breast.

I remember my fear my fast beating heart
But slowly she spread her legs apart

And when I did it I felt no shame.
All at once the white stuff came

At last it's finished it's all over now
My first time ever at milking a cow.....
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Post by Sherflow on Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:04 pm

Isn't this Poem called "The White stuff came"?

It's funny I like it.


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Post by Evil_Otaku on Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:11 pm

Sherflow wrote:Isn't this Poem called "The White stuff came"?

It's funny I like it.

Nope. Its official title is My First Time, written by Zerick D.

He also wrote some other poems, but they're hard to find online.
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Post by Sherflow on Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:14 pm

Ah, yeah you're right. I saw this on a board on a Linkin Park website and it was titled "the white stuff came".
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Re: Poem - My First Time

Post by Guest on Thu Apr 16, 2015 8:30 pm

So erotic.

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Post by Bryan Dacote on Fri Apr 17, 2015 12:55 am

Key wrote:So erotic.

Would you say too erotic...?
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Post by Hyera on Fri Apr 17, 2015 3:32 am

yea...erotic x3
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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 17, 2015 7:27 am

It's cool cool. No need to be overly strict.

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Post by Bryan Dacote on Fri Apr 17, 2015 2:20 pm

Yeah I agree. I was just iffy on the touching breasts part of it.

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Post by gwidhw on Fri Apr 17, 2015 7:56 pm

..I approve this message.
Very amusing xD
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